I understand it is
important to set and aim to achieve a target during each session. This Target Plan is my responsibility and it
is to be brought to every lesson.
If progress with targets is not achieved, lunchtime catch-up sessions
will be arranged, failure to attend these will result in disciplinary action.
DATE
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SUBJECT
Ideation- Research –
Planning –
Production - Evaluation
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TARGET FOR THIS SESSION
Specific – Measurable –
Achievable –
Realistic/relevant – Timely
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REFLECTION
DID
I ACHIEVE MY TARGET?
What went well? - What
didn’t go well? - Why?
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Research
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I have indeed done this, it went well and i learnt a lot that will impact and help me with my final product.
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1st may
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production
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This week I want to edit at least 2 different scenes until I have a draft I'm proud of. and is ready to be added to the whole film.
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I have done three scenes although i may re record some of one from a better angle. i am very happy with my scenes and i feel i worked hard on them.
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8th of may
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editing
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this week i want to finish most of the re shoots and edit it all together to get a full first draft.
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I have finished a full draft but there are still things i want to re shoot. i am happy with how i worked this week and i feel like i have done lots at a good standard.
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15th may
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Editing
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This week i want to re shoot and work on my draft more
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Throughout this week i updated my draft and i like it a lot more now, i can see it getting better. i also did a re shoot and i am happy with how i worked |
22th may
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Editing +
Production |
This week i want to add screenshots to my blog and continue editing
| I have added screenshots and a screen recording to my blog and i have continued making my video more professional. |
29th may
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Editing
+ production |
This week i want to finish editing and add to my blog more
| I have added lots to my blog that need annotating and i have edited my video to a final standard i am happy with. |
5th june
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Evaluation
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This week i want to do my evaluation and update my blog.
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12th June
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this is my production and planning sheets including an old storyboard and new ones.
my first storybords
I made these story boards with simple what i wanted and what i thought would work then i looked through it and i saw bits that cvoukd be changed and taken out so i made another storyboard.
my second ones
I made these ones as an updated version, this is what i went out to shoot with, i have on my production page all of the notes i made while filming and why i changed or added stuff but this is mostly accurate on what i made in the end there was just some bits that didn't look right or didn't fit properly, overall though i really liked this storyboard but there was improvements that had to be made.
ive now changed and added some so here is the added and changed final bits that should follow the story and re shoots and story changes.I changed the bag section as the gun wouldn't fir in the backpack and it looked better with the guitar case it adds more confustion and makes the ending a lot more unexpected. i cut out a section in the end of him walking down the street with the bag on because it felt uneccesary and long and from asking my target audience i got feedback that it was a bit out of place.
this is a bit confusing to look at but i added a new scene where he swaps bags to the one with the gun in and ive put it after he comes back from meeting poeple but shots 11-16 will be in this scene now as its more important and should be longer than the others but i do not want to repeat stuff so ive moved it and changed it slightly.
This is my sound list, there are not any sounds but background music and laughing as i wanted to make it seem more ambient and not the whole focus of the audience on the visual side of my product.
my risk assessment















Your targets are looking very well kept and up to date, you are clearly gaining something from using these and it will help kept track of time management. The only downside of this is that there isn't much text compared to the amount of photo's. Furthermore, although its not essential, the photo's will be easier to read is they are scanned in using CamScanner, if you don't have enough space to download this, then Notes that is pre-downloaded on any iPhone has the same setting to do this.
ReplyDeleteokay so the storyboards are up to a decent standard but the one thing that lets this page down is
ReplyDeleteone: the shot list picture is too blurry and and small to understand so i you want you could take the photo again that would be amazing.
two: if you can try and add a ground shot of the potential shooting location and agian take the photo again so we could see the writing.
overall this page is pretty good very noice!
There is evidence of good planning here Alice, it's good that you have a second storyboard to show the development of your idea. I would like you to include a little write up (or recording) of what you have changed and why?
ReplyDeleteI agree with Harry's first point in that its hard to see some of the pictures. I think you should scan them in instead of taking a picture of them on your phone to avoid any confusion. Putting that aside, its a good page.
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